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Forever darling - Suna-onna
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Kansio: Muu - K13-K15

Eka ficci enkuks joten virheitä varmaan löytyy. Taas lyhyt but I hope you will like it. Nää on ajatuksii joten saatte päätellä kuka ajattelee ja kuka on ajatusten kohde, vaikka kohde tskin jää ainakaan epäselväksi.
Kommentteja ja pisteitä pliis kaipaan niitä ja janoan myös.

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I was dead untill I met you.
You were the one that brought me through.
Through sadness to joy.
Your wind, your lifeforce it filled me with passion and will.
The passion of love and life.
The will that you can see now when all hope is gone.
Can I be the one now, the one that brings back your courage and smile.
will I be enough for you, or will you continue for someone else.
For the one that really left you.
The one that said bad thing and beat you down.
He hurted you for sure but I didn't.
I could never hurt you as he did.
Why? Why wont you see me.

The day when he left you lost all your hope but somehow you still rise from that sadness and sorrow. I didn't help you through it. You didn't let me. That was the day when I lost all of my hope. But still still I couldnt stop dreaming. Dreaming was my way to survive.
Then you were gone also. Gone like the wind that blows from the mountain. You left from the village to train. To become stronger. To train with that old fart. The mighty pervert of the village. Will you be the same as he is I hope not. I was so mad that you never even saw me as a girl. I was just that shy blushing little comrade of yours.
Now when I have grown up will you see me as I am, or will I always stay in the shadow of everyone else. Will I be woman for you now? I hope that you will come back soon so I won't have to wait long for finding that out. So i could finally go on with my life and let our relationship stay as it is. Friends.
So i could find someone else to become as important to me as you are now.
I hope that someday I'll find someone to love me as I am. To care me with all of his passion. To love me till the day we die.

Blushing, rushing does it matter as long as it is true?
Flying, crying will I ever make it through?
Come here, come near that feeling of forgiveness and jealousy so I can put another one in my heart and throw another away forever.
I don't need pity. I need love for sure.
Come here and take me to the seventh heaven with you.
Charm me with your passion and I'll be yours forever.
FOREVER DARLING...

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Yritän jossain vaihees myös jatkaa polkua ei vaan oikeen nyt luonnistu joten päätin kokeilla jotain uutta. Toivon että piditte. Risuja/ruusuja? *käpertyy pelokkaana nurkkaan odottamaan*  

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